Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, August 17, 2021

Why are phones good for school?

I learnt how to use some persuasive reasons.

First I brainstormed some topics and decided which one I was going to use. I then chose my topics that I was gonna use my topic was Why are phones good for school? and my argument was Students should be allowed to take phones to school.

Next I typed some information why are phones good for school.

Then I researched some other information that other people belive in. I had three reasons to do and they were: Phones are good for school because they can help call a relative so they know where you are audio and video make learning fun Phones are also useful because they have acess to tools and apps that can help them with classwork. Phones can be setted up with a calendar and schedule.

I think I need more practise on my researching. ‌‌‌    

Tuesday, August 10, 2021

Traffic Light

I made a document and I inserted a table.

First I watched 2 videos. I watched the first video first then the next video. The first video was about brainstorming and the second video was about planning. Then I got on with the next step.

Later I brainstormed some ideas from my head. Then I typed 3 categories which were: Myself, School and the world. Then I typed my ideas in the right catogory lane.

In the end I colour coded all my ideas if they were all ok to proceed or not. Red means stop, yellow means it's ok and green means it can proceed.

I learned a lot about brainstorming, planning and persuasion. Next time I should have brainstormed more ideas.





Thursday, July 1, 2021

Explanation Starter| Strawberries

 I learned how to explain a basic fact, a hook and an emotion.

 First I used the Basic fact about strawberries. A strawberry is a type of fruit.
 A Basic Fact is like a main fact or a simple fact.

 Then I used the Hook. Did you know that there are different types of strawberries?
 A Hook is something that starts with did you know.

 Then I used the emotion of when somebody ate a strawberry.
 A strawberry is a type of fruit and they are yummy.
 A emotion is similar to a feeling.




Thursday, June 17, 2021

Explanation Planner

 I learned how to use a Explanation Topic Planner.

 I first thought of what my topic was and it was how strawberries grow.

 These are the 3 mechanisims of how strawberries grow.

 The first mechanisim is the seed. 
 The cause is when the strawberry grows there are seeds for you to plant.
 And the effect is You need the seeds for it to grow a plant and strawberries.


Thursday, May 27, 2021

Explanation

A introduction contains an interesting question or a hook. 

First Mr Ogilvie showed us a video about how to write a hook and what is a hook. 
Next, we wrote an introduction and a hook about three different topics.

Did you know that there are almost 20,000 butterfly speices ? The mother butterfly lays eggs and they turn into caterpillarsnand makes a chrysalis and then turns into a butterfly. It takes 9 to 14 days to take a caterpillar to a butterfly.

Did you know the largest firework display consisted of 810,904 fireworks? A firework consists of gunpowder a fuse and potassium nitrate. When these three mechanisims come together they create a colorful explosion in the air.
 
Do you know that choclate is made by coco powder? First dried coco beans will be roasted also heat blend food coloring sugar and flour. When the choclate is made they will wrap it in paper.



 Next time when I write a introduction I should add more information.

















LI: how to write a hook in an introduction.

Tuesday, May 18, 2021

The life cycle of a butterfly

I did a cause and effect task it was about a life cycle of a butterfly. 

First I sorted out the explanation of the life cycle of a butterfly.

Second I wrote a cause and effect sentence about when the caterpillars were in their eggs.

Next I wrote another cause and effect sentence about that caterpillars are incredibly hungry.

Then I wrote another cause and effect sentence about when caterpillars make a chrysalis.

After that I wrote a cause and effect sentence about when caterpillars turn into butterflys.

I really liked doing the activity because it was part of learning and it was fun.



 




Thursday, March 11, 2021

Handwriting

I learned how to write the alphabet, numbers, symbols, properly.

I watched a video to show neat handwriting.I wrote the characters neatly into my writing book.

I need to practice writing my J's on the line.



Thursday, February 18, 2021

All About Me 2021

 Hello.

My name is Kaysorn. I am Burmese. I am in LS1 at Panmure Bridge School. I enjoy writing at school and I enjoy playing with my friends at home.

Tuesday, September 15, 2020

My building (bridge)

I made this with my friend Zariah we build a bridge with our reading Group

but me and Zariah decided to make it together so we did.

Thursday, September 3, 2020

What I did in the lockdowns

In the lockdowns i did homework with Yavi and we play some splash and steps web

but since we can’t go to each other I just call her on google.We even play games after we do our homework.After playing games we have lunch and this is what we

had for lunch:rice and fried eggs and soup.after lunch we play out side my baby brother played outside too.

My 2nd comic

This is my 2nd time making a comic!I didn’t get to finish it.But I hope you like it!

Friday, August 7, 2020

Life education van

Yesterday  We went to the Life Education van and met Nicole and Harold.